just a thought

[crazy a]

just a thought


when you're alone at night
and break a sweat by sitting
still,
when you have a hot bath
and a cool bed
and a waiting woman with
thighs like firm sugar,
when you have the taste of
caramel and coconut
in your mouth,
when you have a good radio
spilling the music of
dead Russians and dead Germans
into your lap,
when you have the words inside you
and the fingers to tap them
onto paper,
when you have uncut grass at the last minute,
when you have a roof and walls,
when you have more love
given to you than you know
you deserve,

then either the gods
made a mistake or
you did something
right.

[Oz]

Wow. I really like the last lines. I wasnt expecting them at all. Nice setup though...

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"What about him? What are you doing with him?"
"What you should be doing with me..."

Proud family member of Jelymo, gollum, Kelly, Dano, Jaxom27, 5Cats, Fenix and others.

I believe you can't appreciate real love until you've been burned

Arch-nemesis of Tea Woman

[Coke Cans]

heh. cool.

[Chilimuffin]

I second Oz's opinion... <G> I like the imagery too... things I don't usually think about, like dead russians on the radio as a good thing, but you're right .

[Branflakes]

Ditto what everyone said.

"Thighs like firm sugar". I like that one!

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Branflakes, the ninja lesbian milk getter bunny protecting flirt.
The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
Life is what you make it.
"I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden

When shall I hold my passion for you?

[Ski]

You would Bran, just kidding But really it was well done.

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Ski
Last of the Freelance Drinkers
Greatest sword fighter in Michigan
The man in the black Trans Am
Miral's Slave
"It's a Detroit thang...you wouldn't understand."
"In the darkest hour,hope springs eternal"
"The man who kissed a ninja lesbian and lived to tell about it."